Saturday, August 6, 2011
C/C Poem.....Home Sick?
A careful poem, if anyone tells you to re arrange it, never believe him. I guess "home" is the male embrace, something you have had and now you are missing. (A good medicine for pains, headaches, and others is a combination of celery tender sticks raw, and tea-potions of rosemary or chamomile. Celery for the head. Rosemary cleans the system of food passing (intestines), chamomile for smooth nerves, good sleep. Please, try) This poem looks warmer, since the verses are more full, longer with more meanings in them. I noticed the one by one verse - use of "I am home...", looks nice. I feel that good feelings received even from far away account much more than never existed feelings. So, as long as you have good friends to think of you positively, it is a very good thing. An honest effort, nicely written. Thank you. G.
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